This is my first person point of view, it is the golfer looking down on himself hitting the golf ball (the jewel). The Jewel is a commentary on the game of golf being a rich person sport. I find it to be quite entertaining, the jewel is so shiny!
This is my 3rd person point of view of someone watching the golfer swing. The duration of time that my story is taking up is only about 10 seconds of time. I want to take on the challenge of making such a short amount of time interesting. The extra elements of commentary help such as; the jewels, the diagramatic shapes, and the 1950's vintage look. They all speak on their own.
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