There's some strong compositions where the word and image come together in an effective way, Examine, Insight, and Analyze for example.
Reveal could be behind the lamp a bit. Think about finding a new word for the Warmth composition (Power too), it's effective but the word could relate in a less obvious way. Thought could be divorced from the object, set straight instead of along the curve. It would seem more like a thought escaping maybe. Idea is a bit too decorative, the letterforms don't carry any extra meaning.
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Mo,
There's some strong compositions where the word and image come together in an effective way, Examine, Insight, and Analyze for example.
Reveal could be behind the lamp a bit. Think about finding a new word for the Warmth composition (Power too), it's effective but the word could relate in a less obvious way. Thought could be divorced from the object, set straight instead of along the curve. It would seem more like a thought escaping maybe. Idea is a bit too decorative, the letterforms don't carry any extra meaning.
Nice work, Michael
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